One can enjoy the good only after he has known the bad. We have heard variations of this phrase throughout our lives. But what does it really mean? Have you tried to think about it? The message this phrase gives is that only after you have survived the biggest losses, be it financial, emotional or wellness, you can really appreciate the gains. Even the smallest of things can bring you tremendous joy.
Let's take the first example of a friend of mine. He suffered from partial paralysis during the junior year, and the school year had barely started. Before going through that trauma, he had a carefree attitude. Only studied when he wanted, which led to his grades were poor. He felt like he had many friends, being popular can bring that illusion. Basically, he behaved like an entitled brat. During the recovery, when he really needed support from his friends, only a few showed up. That coupled with the trauma led him to depression. But what he didn’t realize was that those who showed up for him really cared for him. After some time when he realized this, he was really moved. When the recovery completed, he was a changed man. He was always the most optimistic person. He motivated us when the rest of us were down. To cap it all off, the title of "most cheery" person was given to him at the graduation. Only after facing sadness in the form of illness and desertion he was able to isolate the things which brought him joy.
Conversely, when someone experiences the birth of their first child. It does not matter if they have been through hard times or not. This memory will always be associated with pure pleasure. Events like this, where we are aware will never be repeated, bring out the purest of emotion be it positive or negative. Similarly, marriage, the first job, these situations will always be the most cherished, and one can always count on them to fill you with calmness when remembered in the worst situations.
After knowing real sadness one can fill happiness in the smallest moments, but the grandest moments will always leave their mark. Thus, to conclude, I would rectify the original statement. I will re-frame it as, "One who can identify the moments of happiness are the only ones that can really appreciate their value."
- Only once one has known real sadness can one feel true happiness. 50
- The following is an excerpt from a letter sent by the principal of Greenwood School to the parents of all incoming kindergarteners. "We have decided to institute a policy of all-day kindergarten, instead of half-day kindergarten, for all students at Green 66
- The following is an excerpt from a letter sent by the principal of Greenwood School to the parents of all incoming kindergarteners. "We have decided to institute a policy of all-day kindergarten, instead of half-day kindergarten, for all students at Green 46
- A nation should require all its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college rather than allow schools in different parts of the nation to determine which academic courses to offer 50
- Only once one has known real sadness can one feel true happiness. 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...things can bring you tremendous joy. Lets take the first example of a friend of m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, first, if, really, similarly, so, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 33.0505617978 182% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1892.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 397.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76574307305 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4055085917 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556675062972 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 6.24550561798 256% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 23.0359550562 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7553072581 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.2413793103 118.986275619 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.6896551724 23.4991977007 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.10344827586 5.21951772744 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145628154769 0.243740707755 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381385154562 0.0831039109588 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733762126696 0.0758088955206 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115064704959 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0804643897838 0.0667264976115 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 14.1392134831 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 48.8420337079 154% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 12.1743820225 49% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.79 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 11.2143820225 64% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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