Smoking is harmful to health and some governments have banned smoking in public. Do you think it is justified on their part to ban smoking?
These days, there is an ongoing debate between the people that Smoking is harmful and many governments have banned smoking in public places. While it is possible to claim that these moves come after many studies and reports suggesting severe health problems to passive smokers. In this essay, I shall explain my point of view by analyzing both sides of the argument.
To begin with, I would like to state that the hazardous effects of smoking are well known to our society and, the governments are also advertising its ill-effects. Smoking causes cancers of the lung, mouth, throat, liver and impairs immune system. To illustrate, according to study conducted by the World Health Organisation, it was found that smoking related diseases kill one in ten adults globally.
In continuation to the above point, I would also like to state that in today's modern world, Smoking consider as Fashion symbol in between the teenagers and youth, furthermore, teenager smoke due to Peer group pressure and smoking advertising. For example, according to health promotion unit, In developed countries, smoking is the greatest cause of death, especially among those who start smoking in their teenage years.
Those who argue for smoking gives pleasure and enjoyment have a different view and say that it can actually be a good thing. Firstly, it is claimed that Revenue from cigarette is going to decline and kind of restriction of someone personal life. But, in my opinion, ban prohibits the people from smoking public places and one can safe from passive smoking.
While there are strong arguments on both sides of the cases, my personal opinion is that i am in favour of government decision to complete ban smoking in public place. Hence, this would help in improving the individual's overall health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, so, well, while, for example, kind of, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 31.9359605911 150% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 295.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10508474576 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57920439621 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 139.433497537 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6022527093 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.846153846 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 7.25397266985 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394315362198 0.242375264174 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129650352968 0.0925447433944 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106548048104 0.071462118173 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210666047128 0.151781067708 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334386560959 0.0609392437508 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 12.6369458128 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 55.0591133005 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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