Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you for thanking you and your staff members for their outstanding services rendered at the venue. Allow me to elaborate.
On 29th May, 2018, I along with my family members had hosted 90th birthday party for my grand-mother, who means the world to us. She has not been keeping well lately and wanted to celebrate her 90th birthday with all the near and dear ones. As, the party involved a lot of elderly guests as such the level of attention needed was very high. In addition, I would throw some special attention of Ms. Wade who went an extra mile to help my grand-mother and made her center of attention in every manner. It was a very emotional moment for me.
Moreover, everything from decoration to final deserts seemed like it cost an arm and a leg. The success of the party means the world to us. Finally, my grand-mother has not stopped talking about the party till now. Finally, with the outstanding display of workmanship you have made a lifelong client. I will not hesitate to refer your company for hosting parties, events etc.
Keep up with the excellent work.
Yours faithfully,
Brad Jason
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'May 2018'.
Suggestion: May 2018
...enue. Allow me to elaborate. On 29th May, 2018, I along with my family members had hos...
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Line 7, column 377, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...company for hosting parties, events etc. Keep up with the excellent work. Your...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, may, moreover, so, well, in addition, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 954.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69950738916 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5026182024 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650246305419 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4680230874 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.1428571429 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 7.41237113402 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237477057306 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712855699813 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723512492164 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113956664404 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764650739449 0.0580467560999 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.