Dear Stephanie,
I am happy to have found time to write to you after such a long time. I hope you and your family are doing great.
Last month I moved into a new house. Our previous house was a long way from my workplace, and everyday commute was killing me. Since I’m living with my folks, they expect me to spend some time with them every day. Now that I have moved to this new house, which is closer to my office, I am able to find more time for them.
Anyway, the good thing is that new house is much bigger than the previous one. It has a beautiful garden, and I can view the see from the balcony. I love it here. We now have two spare rooms so I have converted one into a guest room, and the other one into a study.
I would like to invite you to visit us. Christmas is around the corner. See if you can plan a holiday. Mom would love to see you too.
Lots of love,
Josh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 95, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...e was a long way from my workplace, and everyday commute was killing me. Since I'm ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 720.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.02234636872 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.91464503491 2.54303337028 75% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631284916201 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2014244689 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 48.0 76.5299724578 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.9333333333 16.8248392259 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.933333333333 4.34317383033 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216012707206 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659901869564 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600896592875 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123448525764 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328345448305 0.0580467560999 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.5 8.37731958763 42% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 70.7449484536 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.15 8.71597938144 59% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.59 7.59969072165 74% => OK
difficult_words: 16.0 41.2886597938 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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