Writing a letter to building manager regarding a problem parking your bicycle.
When you started to use bicycle to go to work
What the problem is
Suggesting the solution of the problem.
Dear Mr. James,
I am writing this letter to draw your attention towards inconvenience in parking bicycles the building's parking area.
I, Sandip Ramani, am residing in this building since last two years. Recently, I have started to use bicycles as a mode of transportation to work because of its great impact on health as well as on the environment. Besides, my workplace is just three miles away so it is the best option to cope up with traffic.
However, in our building there is insufficient parking facility, especially for bicycles which is a huge headache for me. I am sure many residences with cycles are facing the same problem. As a result, most of us have to park it outside which is not safe and convenient for us.
Nevertheless, I believe that there is unused space right next to water tank that can be utilized to construct a small bicycle parking. It can easily accommodate 20-25 cycles enough for all the residences of the building. This would not just solve parking problem but a great way to utilize left over place in the compound.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Sandip Ramani
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 19, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
...ings parking area. I, Sandip Ramani, am residing in this building since last tw...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, look, nevertheless, so, well, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 949.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81725888325 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72466391505 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675126903553 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4291154592 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0833333333 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4166666667 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 4.34317383033 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215319563101 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650264045688 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549051395028 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10713520577 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606978380024 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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