Today when we walk into public places or travel around the world, we will notice
that most people look quite similar in both behaviour and physical appearances. It
would appear that one thing steers us to be more alike and in this trend, visual
aspects of our life, like things items we wear or consume are more tangible.
It seems that this specific human behaviour has been hard-wired in their neuron
systems and it is a biological mechanism. With by mimicking others people’s facial
expressions or speech patterns, we develop a sense of similarity and increase
social interaction which are means for surviving. As weakly small creatures,
human beings had to live in flocks and the secret of being accepted was similarity
and accompanying. Evidently, in this process, those who have more talent to copy
others survived and nowadays it is an inseparable part of our social behaviour.
Moreover, imitating others usually occurs in emotional displays, facial expressions
and body gestures, according to many psychologicaly researches,. thereforeby, it
would not be surprising if we find found it in fashions and people’s lifestyles. For
instance, when we revise our old photographs, we will see major changes in the
fashion design throughout these years and it would be hard to find someone
swimming against the current/tide. In fact, most of us try to act in conformity
with social expectations throughout our whole life, especially in superficial issues.
In conclusion, it is sensible to conclude that some social conducts are
evolutionally/evolutionarily prehistorical behaviour and in the meanwhile,
imitation has evolved more in the exhibition rather than other aspects of life,
even though we could find its footprints in exchanges of languages and accents.
- The tendency of human being to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashion clothes and consumer goods. To what extent do you agree? 73
- Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your 73
- The tendency of human being to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashion clothes and consumer goods. To what extent do you agree? 86
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Attending a live performance (for example a play, concert or sporting event) is more enjoyable than watching th 56
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Advertising can tell you a lot about a country. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 56
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Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'swims'.
Suggestion: swims
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50357142857 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29903936234 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632142857143 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.7830426063 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.090909091 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4545454545 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.38176352705 502% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0815595272173 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.033843600746 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365295657128 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0219408085106 0.151304729494 15% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360415767328 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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