childhood is the happiest moment of a life
I agree with the given statement that "Childhood is the happiest time of a person's life". A child when born has no idea of what the world is like, differences between good and bad, importance of money and many more crucial issues which he learns as he grows up. Children are always happy because they are away from the bad reality of the world.
Primarily, I would like to say that children do not have to deal with any kind of stress whether it may be related to money, their career, family issues or any other type. They are dependent on their parents for everything. Away from the tension of food, clothing and money, they are happy in their own world. Whatever they need, all they have to do is just ask from their parents. I think this is the best thing one can get in a lifetime : relief from stress.
In addition to this, children are not supposed to be responsible for the family. They are free to do whatever they like. According to me, the best enemy and reason for a person's sadness is the responsibility for which he is accountable. Children, on the other hand, do not have to deal with responsibilties, so they are very lively and happy.
Furthermore, I would like to illustrate my point with a real life example. Whenever a person is asked to share his/ her best memory, it is seen that he/she shares a memory from the childhood. Very few people share a memory from adulthood. This is because our childhood is filled with innocence and happiness. We are ourselvesas a kid. A child does not have to think before doing anything. I think this is the best part of childhood. Today's world is just about show-off. everybody does something either to gain the profit or to attract others. But being a child, we are away from this trend of the prevailing society.
In order to conclude, I would like to say that, childhood is the only phase in our lives where we can be ourselves and do anything before thinking. A child is free from responsibilities, stress, tension, concern, career etc. So he is always happy. That is why, I think childhood is the happiest time of a person's life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: a person; persons
...'Childhood is the happiest time of a persons life'. A child when born has no id...
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Line 5, column 73, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e not supposed to be responsible for the family. They are free to do whatever the...
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Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...They are free to do whatever they like. According to me, the best enemy and reason for a person...
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Line 5, column 172, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
... to me, the best enemy and reason for a persons sadness is the responsibility for which...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Everybody
...d. Todays world is just about show-off. everybody does something either to gain the profi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ponsibilities, stress, tension, concern, career etc. So he is always happy. That ...
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Line 9, column 307, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ink childhood is the happiest time of a persons life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, so, i think, in addition, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 10.4613686534 287% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 22.412803532 210% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 30.3222958057 181% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 1373.03311258 126% => OK
No of words: 380.0 270.72406181 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55263157895 5.08290768461 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.04702891845 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63991635905 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 145.348785872 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507894736842 0.540411800872 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 535.5 419.366225166 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 3.25607064018 491% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 13.0662251656 199% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 21.2450331126 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8041852498 49.2860985944 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.5384615385 110.228320801 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6153846154 21.698381199 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.03846153846 7.06452816374 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 4.33554083885 392% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131240384923 0.272083759551 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434922240938 0.0996497079465 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0956916678673 0.0662205650399 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.089649118618 0.162205337803 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794357742486 0.0443174109184 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 13.3589403974 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 53.8541721854 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.0289183223 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 12.2367328918 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.42419426049 83% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 63.6247240618 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.498013245 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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