You recently took a part-time job working for a local company. After a few weeks, you realized there were some problems with the job.
Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter
explain why you took the job.
describe the problems that you experienced.
suggest what could be done about them.
Dear Mohan Sir,
My name is Vishal and I am working in your organization since last October as a part-time employee in Quality assurance department. I am writing this letter to you regarding some concerns about the behaviour of some employee with me.
I am a foreign student in Centavo College, and I am working in your organization to fund my education fees. Working in your QA Department has helped a lot to understand the basic parameters required in the food safety and it was a great learning experience, but unfortunately, some of the people in your organization are not good. I do not want to disclose the name of these individuals. Although these people are discriminating on the basis of gender and nationality is going to make the worst condition in the near future. With their unexpected behaviour, I would not be able to work anymore.
I would request to take some actions to control the work-life balance, such as shuffling in different departments of these individuals will be beneficial for both, the company as well as employee.
I hope you will understand my circumstance and grant me to leave the organization.
Thank you
Yours faithfully.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mohan Sir, My name is Vishal and I am working in yo...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...learning experience, but unfortunately, some of the people in your organization are not goo...
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Line 5, column 596, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r, I would not be able to work anymore. I would request to take some actions to ...
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Line 7, column 177, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...ill be beneficial for both, the company as well as employee. I hope you will understand...
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Line 11, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to leave the organization. Thank you Yours faithfully.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.85567010309 311% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97969543147 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10454960438 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604060913706 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4482677245 44.8134815571 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160858513301 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664473718995 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055431520185 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0863257186046 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460912722499 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.