The charts below give information about travel to and from the UK and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit.
The charts below illustrate the quantity of visits to and from UK, and let us compare the popularity of different countries preferred by UK residents for travelling.
According to the first information bar, it is clearly visible that the number of both visits began to grow steadily since the period of 1985-86, but generally visits made by UK residents were always remarkebly more than the given other. Furthermore, the maximum amount of visits to UK by overseas residents-about 27 millions was in 1999, meanwhile the curve reached approximately 52 million.
Having a look at the second graph, it can be noted that more than 10 million out of 52 million UK visitors' choice was France. Other popular countries visited by UK residents were USA, Greece and Turkey in decreasing order.
To summarize, the major conclusion drawn from charts above is that in comparison with other years people became more active in travelling in 1999 and the most preferred country by UK inhabitants was France.
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Sentence: According to the first information bar, it is clearly visible that the number of both visits began to grow steadily since the period of 1985-86, but generally visits made by UK residents were always remarkebly more than the given other.
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