Essay topics:
The pie chart illustrated the working in children. It shows the same circles in children working in percentage. It shows the percentum.
It can be seen that the first circle in children working in 3%. I see the second circle childrens working is a 10%. and third circle is a medium and fourth circle is a shown the full time working.
It shows the 3 years child of a working is 3%. and 7 years old children working in 10%. and upper age children working the medium time. and upper most childrens age for the working in a full time. Upper most childrens is a work very hard. It is a very difficulty work in the age. 10 yers age is no upper age . It is a normal age children and working so hard.
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| 2018-06-23 | Love kaler | 56 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...cond circle childrens working is a 10%. and third circle is a medium and fourth cir...
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Line 1, column 179, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...medium and fourth circle is a shown the full time working. It shows the 3 years child o...
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Line 2, column 48, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...s the 3 years child of a working is 3%. and 7 years old children working in 10%. an...
^^^
Line 2, column 89, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...nd 7 years old children working in 10%. and upper age children working the medium t...
^^^
Line 2, column 137, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...r age children working the medium time. and upper most childrens age for the workin...
^^^
Line 2, column 137, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...r age children working the medium time. and upper most childrens age for the workin...
^^^
Line 2, column 187, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...most childrens age for the working in a full time. Upper most childrens is a work very ha...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 308, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... in the age. 10 yers age is no upper age . It is a normal age children and working...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 33.7804878049 18% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 445.0 965.302439024 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 112.0 196.424390244 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.97321428571 4.92477711251 81% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.2531531234 3.73543355544 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15399029965 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 50.0 106.607317073 47% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.446428571429 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 131.4 283.868780488 46% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 22.4926829268 44% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 13.2071856225 43.030603864 31% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 40.4545454545 112.824112599 36% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.1818181818 22.9334400587 44% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.397227359617 0.215688989381 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.205616082677 0.103423049105 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0932686624282 0.0843802449381 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.319153369278 0.15604864568 205% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00777924355009 0.0819641961636 9% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 2.4 13.2329268293 18% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 95.17 61.2550243902 155% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 2.5 10.3012195122 24% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 4.27 11.4140731707 37% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.12 8.06136585366 64% => OK
difficult_words: 7.0 40.7170731707 17% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 11.4329268293 35% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.9970731707 55% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 4.0 11.0658536585 36% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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