The pie chart illustrated the working in children. It shows the same circles in children working in percentage. It shows the percentum.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...cond circle childrens working is a 10%. and third circle is a medium and fourth cir...
^^^
Line 1, column 179, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...medium and fourth circle is a shown the full time working. It shows the 3 years child o...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 48, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...s the 3 years child of a working is 3%. and 7 years old children working in 10%. an...
^^^
Line 2, column 89, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...nd 7 years old children working in 10%. and upper age children working the medium t...
^^^
Line 2, column 137, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...r age children working the medium time. and upper most childrens age for the workin...
^^^
Line 2, column 137, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...r age children working the medium time. and upper most childrens age for the workin...
^^^
Line 2, column 187, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...most childrens age for the working in a full time. Upper most childrens is a work very ha...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 308, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... in the age. 10 yers age is no upper age . It is a normal age children and working...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, third

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 33.7804878049 18% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 445.0 965.302439024 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 112.0 196.424390244 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.97321428571 4.92477711251 81% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.2531531234 3.73543355544 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15399029965 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 50.0 106.607317073 47% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.446428571429 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 131.4 283.868780488 46% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 22.4926829268 44% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 13.2071856225 43.030603864 31% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 40.4545454545 112.824112599 36% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.1818181818 22.9334400587 44% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.397227359617 0.215688989381 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.205616082677 0.103423049105 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0932686624282 0.0843802449381 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.319153369278 0.15604864568 205% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00777924355009 0.0819641961636 9% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 2.4 13.2329268293 18% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 95.17 61.2550243902 155% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 2.5 10.3012195122 24% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 4.27 11.4140731707 37% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.12 8.06136585366 64% => OK
difficult_words: 7.0 40.7170731707 17% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 11.4329268293 35% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.9970731707 55% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 4.0 11.0658536585 36% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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