Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. film starts, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? which other types of jobs should be highly paid?
Certain section of society perceives that the artists and athletes are overpaid. It is unanimously agreed that colossal amount of money is being given to people from this industry. Firstly, I will advocate my opinion by giving numerous reasons. Secondly, I will enlighten few other notable professions, which also need prompt consideration by giving reasonable remunerations.
To begin with, industries which are merely responsible for entertaining people are paid higher salaries. The intention behind this is very transparent and it is because that they completely deserve it. The profit which they are making is visible to everyone, but the hard work behind it is concealed. After putting in hard work of days and nights, they finally able to bring an outcome in front of people and they usually love it. For instance, let me give you a very well-known example of Leonardo Dicaprio, who started his career from short films and after even reaching to the peak of his career, he was disregarded for the award many times. Eventually, he got it, but after putting in much more effort. Giant companies frequently choose celebrities for advertisement of their products and the reason is because common people follow these celebrities. So the share of the profit is given to the brand ambassador of the product. For example, Sharukh Khan, who is one of the renowned celebrities worldwide, has earned 70 billion INR in 2017, only from advertisement of different products.
On the other hand, there are few very notable professions of the society, which are not even reasonably paid, but they are also underestimated. These professions are very imperative in the development of a society; unfortunately, they have been overlooked by most of the countries. As for further illustration, teachers are one of the most underpaid professions in every country. Moreover, doctors and engineers are likewise not paid enough money. This results in an unprecedented surge in the migration of these people.
All of the above arguments fortify my perception that celebrities are given huge salaries, because they deserve it. Secondly, there are several other professions, which are important for prosperity of the nation, but regrettably, they are not paid enough.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 805, Rule ID: REASON_IS_BECAUSE[1]
Message: Probably an incorrect phrase. Use 'the reason 'is that''.
Suggestion: is that
...sement of their products and the reason is because common people follow these celebrities....
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
...ge in the migration of these people. All of the above arguments fortify my perception t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, likewise, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, as for, for example, for instance, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1897.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26944444444 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9664156677 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563888888889 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6792714898 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.85 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137842065149 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422264929792 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534090799396 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0848070378619 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00634571451699 0.056905535591 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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