You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
Explain why you have moved.
Describe the new house.
Invite your friend to come and visit.
Dear John,
I am writing you to let you know that I have changed my previous house and moved in to the better one across the street.
My previous landlord was insisting to increase the house rent which could be difficult for me as currently I need money to submit my semester fees. In addition, I was in a search of house with more rooms as my parents are planning to visit me for a month.
This new house has two bedrooms and a separate living room which would be great in terms of comfort for my family hoping to visit next week. Moreover, it is situated around the corner of the street from where super market and park is only few minutes walk away.
I wish, you could also pay a visit with you family whenever you get a off from you job.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
All the best,
Nusrah
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-08-01 | bhatvishal@ | 61 | view |
| 2019-04-20 | Praful Shah | 89 | view |
| 2019-01-25 | ayps | 56 | view |
| 2018-06-27 | Nusrah Naeem | 70 | view |
| 2018-06-27 | Nusrah Naeem | 70 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 69, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... visit with you family whenever you get a off from you job. Looking forward to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, so, in addition, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 678.0 937.175257732 72% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37419354839 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09706201499 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645161290323 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 198.9 290.88556701 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.290984916 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.75 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 4.34317383033 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137386722627 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582334530599 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664022374933 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0910926330601 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678350455816 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.07 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.