Nowadays, there is an ongoing debate that whether parents are responsible for their children behave or not. While some people state that parents are fully responsible for their children actions and other believed that it's not a totally depend on parents. According to my opinion, parents should be legally accountable for their child's action and behavior. This essay will further elaborate on both sides and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There is a number of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is that parents are the primary person in children' life and they always influence from their parents. In addition, parents should be aware of their children reaction towards the society and teach them the difference between right or wrong from the early age. Undoubtedly, it is clear that parents can play a crucial role in children's life.
Another pivotal aspect is that children reaction depends on the environment, how they grow and how their parents teach them. Furthermore, in the early age parents are the first mentor in children life. Moreover, children start learning in their home. For example, if parents teach them good habits then it will be continued in their whole life. Hence, it is apparent why many people are believed in that parents are responsible for their children acts.
In the view of arguments above, one can be concluded that parents are fully responsible for their children behavior.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, then, thus, while, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 5.60731707317 535% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1214.0 965.302439024 126% => OK
No of words: 238.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10084033613 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5367714477 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525210084034 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 283.868780488 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3419289608 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7142857143 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371647731412 0.215688989381 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143377452213 0.103423049105 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855520819511 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249047463008 0.15604864568 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372944584776 0.0819641961636 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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