The three pie charts below show the Changes in annual spending by a particular uk school in 1981,1991and 2001

Essay topics:

The three pie charts below show the Changes in annual spending by a particular uk school in 1981,1991and 2001

The given circular chart demonstrate the information about the percentage of the total yearly expenditure which were spent by uk school on five amount sector in three different year: 1981,1991 and 2001

It is clear that, out of total percentage. The maximum was spending on teachers salaries in three different year.moreever, in1981, the uk school spent on 2%insurance and 28%other workers salaries. After that in 2001, 8%insurane and 15%other worker salaries was spent by the uk school.

Moving ahead, out of the total percentage
15 percent spent on furniture and equipment. In 1981, having ten year, 8percent spent on furniture and equipment. After that, in 2001 the uk school was spent on furniture and equipment i.e 23persent of total expenditure. apart from this, around 14percent of the expenditure on resources e.g.books in three different year.
Overall, the highest expenditure on teachers salaries and lowest expenditure on insurance in three different year.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 152, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'sector' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'sectors'.
Suggestion: sectors
... were spent by uk school on five amount sector in three different year: 1981,1991 and ...
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Line 3, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... 1981,1991 and 2001 It is clear that, out of total percentage. The maximum was...
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Line 6, column 222, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Apart
...ent i.e 23persent of total expenditure. apart from this, around 14percent of the expe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
e.g., if, so, apart from

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 827.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47682119205 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9002842295 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529801324503 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.6025594072 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.375 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184816327257 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089487130649 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589151653095 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990593440134 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714680638719 0.0819641961636 87% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 11.4140731707 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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