In cities many people are living alone. What are the reasons for it? Is it a positive or a negative trend?
It has been observed that many individuals in the metropolitan cities live alone. Mainly these people are migrated from rural areas for their development and to find better opportunities. Which force them to survive alone in big cities without their families. In my opinion, this trend is leading a negative impact for the humankind.
People in metro cities are often living alone and spend most of their life in their businesses or jobs to collect money as much as possible for their family. These people are mostly from rural areas and travel thousands of miles to find better opportunities away from their family and relatives. Furthermore to support their family in an economical way. Although some of them get too addicted towards money and never return to home.
Moreover, the relationship with family members is most affected in their life. Staying away from their family and alone in the crowded cities can have an adverse effect sometimes to their brains and memories which results in the psychological effect. Because of these impact more suicidal and, isolation cases are observed in cities.
In conclusion, living alone in the crowded cities can help you financially but the social life of an individual is completely destroyed. People are money oriented nowadays, with this attitude to people will end up with psychologically hampered society. In the near future, the impact on family bonding will be the most.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
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Message: Consider replacing "in an economical way" with adverb for "economical"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...es. Furthermore to support their family in an economical way. Although some of them get too addicted...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, as for, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1202.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15879828326 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6520132556 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575107296137 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2840514357 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8571428571 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6428571429 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190318624408 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688336849412 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786762675979 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13073112159 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105281301315 0.056905535591 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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