Some people say that computer games are bad for children by all means others believe that these games are contributing to children development. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
With the rise in the modernisation, a man has transformed his life tremendously. He has progressed from walking bore footed in the jungles to take first step on the moon. Nevertheless, there are some issues which remains irrevocable and as complex as ever. Forinstance, the given topic some masses think that computer games are not good for children while other think these games are contributing to children development. Through this essay, i shall explore the dimensions of this topic and shape up my opinion by the end.
On one side, there is a group of people who believe that kids activities have been shifted from outdoor to rooms specify to screen. They are engrossed and playing video games. They strengthened their viewpoints by claiming that playing video games improve the hand eye quardination. Children can learn many visual attebr skills. The best option of this, it is important for overall development of the children because children learn how to follow the instructions carefully. Also, it sharp the memory of the children and they learn lessons of multitasking.
Contary to this, there is an opposing group of people who believe that video games are good for children. Moreover, most of the bad effects of video games are more likely to have aggressive thoughts, feelings and behaviour. It makes them socially isolated. However, they may spend less time in activities such as homework, reading and sport activities. It plus them bad effect on their health too.
In conclusion, it is important for overall development of the children, outer activities and study within the limits so that it may not effect their facts of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05882352941 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76375726842 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591911764706 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3334604029 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.9411764706 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82352941176 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301745895146 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769218100813 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101467082656 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162831801638 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061693284989 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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