The provide bar chart depicts how Australian male and female in six age groups been regularly physically active in 2010. Overall, men have been more active than women in all age categories, however, the eldest men and women showed very minimal difference.
More than half of men in Australia have been physically active on regular basis in three age categories (35 to 44, 45 to 54 and 55 to 64) in contrast to Australian active women, when only age group 15 to 24 showed this trend.
Women in Australia have been the last active in age 35 to 44 (39,5 per cent), when Australian men represented this with similar numbers in age group 15 to 24 and 65 and over, 47,7 per cent and 47,1 per cent respectively.
Actually, the oldest group of Australians in both gender depict same data, nearly under fifty per cent (46,7 per centmale, 47,1 per cent female).
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should begin learning a foreign language as soon as they start school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position. 73
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- The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. 73
- The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where rel 61
- Modern society is becoming more concerned about the increase in juvenile crime What do you think is the cause of the increase in juvenile crime What solutions can you suggest 93
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
The provide bar chart depicts how Australian male a...
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Line 2, column 206, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'showed' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'shows'.
Suggestion: shows
...ive women, when only age group 15 to 24 showed this trend. Women in Australia have b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, however, if, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 699.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59868421053 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46245175157 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565789473684 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 210.6 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.8387956039 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.8 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4 22.9334400587 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.23603664747 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345751404801 0.215688989381 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.21568271262 0.103423049105 209% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114434822188 0.0843802449381 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225280673021 0.15604864568 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1427561391 0.0819641961636 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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