The table below gives information about favourite pastimes in different countries in percentage.
The given tabular chart illustrates the information about seven pastime activities which were performed by age of 30-50 years in a different nations. The data is colibrated in percentum which is clearly and coherently represented.
Overall, it is evident that the highest percentage was reading in all countries and the lowest percentage was sleep pastimes in different countries.
It can be seen that the canada was performed only 60 percent on television. And in the case of sport, it performed 22 percent on canada. Also, canada was spend 40 percent on hobbies and 15 percent on reading respectively. Interesting, it spend on 0 percent on beach. When it comes to France, and England, it spend almost same time on reading, hobbies and music. Whereas, Australia, it spend highest percentage on television. The percentage of beach and sport has constant in Australia.
Movingfurther, korea, it spend on almost same time on television and sport. It spend 60 percent on reading and 45 percent on hobbies. It remains constant, the percentage of beach and music. Moreover, china spend on 15 percent on television and 25 percent on pastime. Besides, it spend approximately same on reading and hobbies. It remains same on beach and sleep. Furthermore, USA spend 62 percent on television and 42 percent on hobbies. It spend on lowest time on sleep. It was noticeable that, in the case of Japan, it performed only reading activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'nation'?
Suggestion: nation
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Suggestion: spent
... 22 percent on canada. Also, canada was spend 40 percent on hobbies and 15 percent on...
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Message: Did you mean 'spends'?
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Message: Did you mean 'spends'?
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...hen it comes to France, and England, it spend almost same time on reading, hobbies an...
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Message: Did you mean 'spends'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, if, moreover, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 5.60731707317 321% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1194.0 965.302439024 124% => OK
No of words: 235.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08085106383 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96524610658 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.451063829787 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 359.1 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 1.53170731707 914% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 8.94146341463 212% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0709226299 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.8421052632 112.824112599 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.3684210526 22.9334400587 54% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.78947368421 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.09268292683 342% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0570360191543 0.215688989381 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0159413994696 0.103423049105 15% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473025050503 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0668033599399 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067125308236 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.2329268293 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.