Visual pollution is the major cause of accident on roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Visual pollution is more poisonous than any other pollution because it kills soul. Visual pollution ia an aesthetic issue and refers to the impact of pollution that impairs one's ability to enjoy a vista or view. The given topic asserts that, is visual pollution key reason behind accidents on roads? I completely agree with this point.
To embark with, visual pollution disturbs the visual area of people by creating harmful changes in natural enviornment. Billboard on the roadsand advertisement are also examples of visual pollution. An incident happened in America where forty eight cars went through accident because of a car distracted by advertisements on billboards. Moreover, ope storage of trash is anotjer reason for distraction. A survey was conducted which revealed many accidents that occur in developing countries due to open storage trash.
A building that is made of glass van reflect sunlight, which is dangerous for the people driving by. Depression, stress and anxiety due to bad views. Visual pollution has Several effects such as; distraction, eye fatigue, decrease in opinion diversity and loss od identity. Visual pollution ruins the asthetic appeal of a specified area. Visual pollution occurs when an individual cannot enjoy the view in particular area due to negative changes in a natural enviornment.
As we have seen that there are number of anwers to this question. On balance however, I tend to believe that government should execute some laws to avoid accidents due to visual pollution suvh as to ban billboards on areas like highways etcetera.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, as to, in particular, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28968253968 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80039263615 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650793650794 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3109819624 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3125 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217789402023 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711193162997 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052424826932 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136525526175 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523472924949 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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