Healthy society is dream from the beginning of the time, however, there is no set criteria how perfect society should look like. This essay will try to find answers of this interesting topic people talk about for ages and could not find answers.
Nowadays, people live busier than ever before. Life and our lifestyle become time consuming and less than ever human contact with other individuals, such as friends, family or partner, people finding hard to get. Although we can be in touch with our close ones through social media, cell phone or computer, personal contact is getting lost. From old age, human beings wanted to be accompanied by other individuals to feel comfortable. This habit remained till now, and in my opinion will be here as long is life on The Earth.
In my opinion, people loosing kindness and tendency being polite, helpful and honest to each other, based on what I have described above. For example, I have recently watched movie "The Giver", where all habitants in future lived in black and white environment, have been thankful and grateful to each other. Jealousy and violet behaviour was erased from so called "perfect world". From the other hand, people could not follow their human instincts, they could not dance, sing or flirt with others.
To sum up, I really do not think, that perfect world or perfect society exist and could be ever achieved. From my opinion, humans should be more kind and polite to each other and build population, where every body will feel safe and have own freedom, instead of seeking so called "perfect world".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, really, so, for example, such as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98507462687 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48399869138 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649253731343 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3684216617 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.769230769 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175382533889 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656503978962 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690289320979 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115630988183 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509016059131 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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