The bar graph illustrates the comparison between four characteristics of life quality with five countries (Bangladesh, Bolivia, Egypt, Indonesia and USA). According to the graph, the highest feature is GNP per head in USA with significant increasing compering with other countries, where it is value about 13000 dollar approximately per head. However this feature in Bolivia, Egypt and Indonesia have slight increasing and seemed equal value approximately. Also the Bangladesh has the lowest level in this feature. In addition to, daily calorie supply per person can be clearly seen in USA and Egypt, where they have a sharp incensing (3500, 3000 calories per head respectively). Whereas, the Bangladesh is the lowest country, Bolivia and Indonesia have approximately equal value (2100, 2000 calories per head respectively).
In conclusion, the USA is the first one in all feature compering between another countries, and the second is Egypt. There are no significant different in another three countries.
- The line graph below shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992 61
- Some people agree that teachers should be strict with their students; others believe that teachers with friendly approach will achieve better results. Discuss and give your opinion. 73
- The diagram below illustrates the carbon cycle in nature. 56
- the development of a fishing village to the hotel resort 73
- People should work a fixed number of hours per week, and employers should not ask anybody to work more than this. Do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 311, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...ountries, where it is value about 13000 dollar approximately per head. However this fe...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 342, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ut 13000 dollar approximately per head. However this feature in Bolivia, Egypt and Indo...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 456, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...g and seemed equal value approximately. Also the Bangladesh has the lowest level in ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, whereas, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51298701299 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00483811822 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61038961039 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.3573451101 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.125 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.125 5.23603664747 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103455558999 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501536820775 0.103423049105 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351075084411 0.0843802449381 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0776868010746 0.15604864568 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0149582242493 0.0819641961636 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 11.4140731707 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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