The supplied chart depicts data of population in millions in Japan from 1950 with prediction to 2055, when the given table provides information of Japanese population over-65s in past and forecasted future. It is obviously seen from the illustrations, that since beginning of the the period population growth as become older.
Over five and half decades population in Japan growth from 84.1 millions in 1950 to its peak of 127.8 millions in 2005. Since 2005 there is visible steady descending trend to current 125.4 millions in 2015. It is forecasted for future two and four decades in 2035 and 2055 dramatic dip to 110 and 89.9 millions respectively.
Getting back to the details, it is predicted that Japanese older than 65 years will be eleven times more in 2055 than in 1950, 4.1 and 36.5 millions respectively. As population growth over decades, Japanese society become older when in 1950 was just above 5 per cent and in 2005 already 20 per cent.
To sum up, population in Japan rase over the time with predicted descending trend in future, however, it Japanese population is older over the time with forecasted increasing tendency.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... to its peak of 127.8 millions in 2005. Since 2005 there is visible steady descending...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 957.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01047120419 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68939787709 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544502617801 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3396572025 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.625 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146052520536 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664298016462 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797555365306 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100982040072 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.079275272898 0.0819641961636 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.