Sports are the most effective way to improve your health.It is the subject of argument whether team sports are more beneficial or individual sports.We will discuss the benefits of both kind of sports,however in my opinion team sports are more preferable choice.
Team sports like football,cricket will help to develop interpersonal skill,coordination with large number of people etc.It helps to improve person's social circle.A team player is more adaptable to the rapid changing world .Working in a team helps you to share your load or stress equally.The ability to work towards the common goal is very important life skill.team sports helps to improve communication skills,learn to respect their teammates.It has a mood boosting effect of social engagement.In team sports a person get lasting friendship.
Nevertheless, individual game has their own benefits.It improves your leadership quality since you are your own boss.you play on your own pace.You become more self dependent .despite of benefits of team sports ,you always get recognize as team,but in individual game you are recognized as single entity.So your visibility is more towards audience in individual game.It gives you a sense of responsibility.
In conclusion ,both types of sports have their own benefits.it gives you relief from stress,work pressure or ability to tackle adverse situations in day to day activities.It leads to a healthier life style even though if you are not able to manage time for daily exercise.Playing any kind of sport helps you in develop your personality,confidence and your health.Sports are just a lot of fun.
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- Some people think it is more beneficial to play sports that are played in teams, e.g. football. However, some people think it is more beneficial to play individual sports, e.g. tennis and swimming. Discuss both view and give your opinion. 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, nevertheless, so, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43824701195 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36476768305 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581673306773 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 62.0 20.2975951904 305% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.4296233524 49.4020404114 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 341.25 106.682146367 320% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 62.75 20.7667163134 302% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.25 7.06120827912 258% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201161058181 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13728787193 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641665617594 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13728787193 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641665617594 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.6 13.0946893788 272% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 0.09 50.2224549098 0% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.7 11.3001002004 254% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.16 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.12 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.8 10.1190380762 265% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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