car advantages nd disadvantages
With the advancement in the technology, modes of transportation have changed noticeably. Earlier, people used to travel by horses or bullock-carts or even by foot. Although, now people like to travel by motored vehicles such as cars, trains, buses as they are swifter than any other mode of transport. People having enough money usually buy a car instead to avoid any kind of inconvenience caused by using public transport. However, with an increasing number of car owners, a conversation has sparked whether the car is a better option or not.
Having a car, of course, has some advantages. Firstly, we can go from one place to another without switching any mode of transport. Secondly, it provides the comfort we sought after. But most importantly, the car gives us the freedom to decide when should we start our journey. Furthermore, it's not necessary to abide by the tight schedules of public transport. Moreover, we need not be anxious about the things we carry while commuting, we can simply put them in the trunk of the car. Also, if are traveling with kids, there is nothing to be bothered about their actions and tantrums.
On the other side of the coin, the car does have some disadvantages as well. First of all, it causes pollution which could have easily be avoided if the public means were utilized. Consequently, there is a drastic increase in the number of asthma patients living in the metropolitan areas. Secondly, the car runs on petrol which is a depleting causing the car operating prices to skyrocket, hence directly affecting our expenditure. Also, the car requires space for parking which is not in abundance everywhere causing long traffic jams which is annoying for a car owner as well as for others.
In my opinion, I would always prefer a car over any other means of transport until and unless public transport outweighs the positives of owning a car.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 136, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...auses pollution which could have easily be avoided if the public means were utiliz...
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Line 5, column 572, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... jams which is annoying for a car owner as well as for others. In my opinion, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, as for, kind of, of course, such as, as well as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9125 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78160812301 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603125 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6430711312 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3333333333 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7777777778 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8333333333 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181699243519 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573366046315 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650873961924 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112684890164 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373316218345 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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