The line graph below shows the number of annual visits to Australia by overseas residents. The table below gives information on the country of origin where the visitors came from.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given.
The line graph illustrates, the data of visitors in Australia from different countries over four decades. While the table demonstrates, the nationality and account of overseas visitors in 1975 and 2005. Units are measured in millions.
Overall, there was an increase in number foreigners visit to Australia over the given period. Furthermore, the most significant visitors from Japan in both years among the given countries.
As is presented in the graph, ten million overseas residents was visited this country in 1975. While, after ten years the number of tourist was climbed up to more than 15 million. However, the account of foreign residents doubled by 1995 then reached to more than 30 million at the end of period.
With regards to the table, overwhelming majority of people visited Australia from Japan in both years such as 3.2 million and 12.0 million respectively. The least residents from China about 0.3 and 0.8 in given years. in 1975 Sauth korea and Europe residents traveled to Australia with 2.9 and 1.1 millions, whereas which reached to 9.1 and 4.5 million by 2005. Moreover, people from USA and Britain has slight increase with more than one million over the given period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 219, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...China about 0.3 and 0.8 in given years. in 1975 Sauth korea and Europe residents t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, then, whereas, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1008.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11675126904 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59107099399 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558375634518 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.681495509 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4166666667 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170188910845 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071778389116 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054015669146 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121844652561 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500440396208 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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