Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
"Government is the most powerful weapon, which you can use to change the world." One of the most controversial issues relates to that government should either focus only on economic progress or on other types of progress of our country? Through this essay, I shall explore the dimensions of this topic through examples and assertions and shape up my opinion by the end.
First of all, economic development is a crucial factor among every country. Moreover, it involves different types of significant factors such as, education, employment and agricultural, etcetera. Similarly, if a country will be well educated then there will be alot of upgradation among the country and, drawbacks such as poverty will be vanished. For instance, it is seen in a report of Canadian University that countries are super advanced where economic growth is main goal.
On the other hand, there are many countries which are having good economic growth but still facing problems like, environmental issues,
hostile relationship with other nations, internal chaos and outbreak of epidemic diseases. In addition to this, economic development had failed to secure good lifestyle of their citizens and, this is a proof that economic development should not be the only vision of the government. After that, government neither be able to secure the external factors nor the citizens of the country.
I pen down saying that, there are number of answers to this question on balance I tend to believe that, there is no doubt that economic growth should be a focus of government but, other factors are also equally important as well for the safety of the people because government is by the people, for the people and of the people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 136, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing problems like, environmental issues, hostile relationship with other nations,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, similarly, so, still, then, well, for instance, in addition, no doubt, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13167259786 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81272998283 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565836298932 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.675572614 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.2 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.3 7.06120827912 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208487921659 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717649443996 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057852694959 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107587025498 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046410317549 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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