The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
» You should write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates, the amount of six kinds of energy by fuel which were consume over 50 years in US. Units are measured in quadrillion.
Overall, the most significant fuel was petrol and oil over the given period and least amount of energy consumption by hydro power.
In terms of nuclear, solar or wind, and hydro power was relatively stable with five quadrillion over ten years of period. Then there was slight increase with remained stable level in nuclear power over the whole years with above five quadrillion units. Similarly, hydro power and solar or wind power has slight fluctuation for the following the next 20 years reached five quadrillion and below five quadrillion respectively.
On the other hand, natural gas began at 20 quadrillion went small oscillation over the years surge up to near 25 quadrillion in 2000 and 2015 then stay steadily with just over 20 quadrillion. Likewise, coal started with above 15 quadrillion went up above 20 quadrillion and remained stable up to 2015 then there were dramatically peaked up to near 30 quadrillion by 2030. Furthermore, petrol and gas presented with 35 quadrillion which fluctuated next 15 years and speedily hike to 40 quadrillion on 2015 and relatively stabilize with such units for the next five years then quickly touch the highest point with over 45 quadrillion by 2050 .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 82, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'consumed'.
Suggestion: consumed
... six kinds of energy by fuel which were consume over 50 years in US. Units are measured...
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Line 7, column 31, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...vely. On the other hand, natural gas began at 20 quadrillion went small oscil...
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Line 7, column 318, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mained stable up to 2015 then there were dramatically peaked up to near 30 quadri...
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Line 7, column 642, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...t point with over 45 quadrillion by 2050 .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, likewise, similarly, so, then, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1130.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 224.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04464285714 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76387989948 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508928571429 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 327.6 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4837125878 43.030603864 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.555555556 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8888888889 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.051280063112 0.215688989381 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0282433905021 0.103423049105 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0151447310066 0.0843802449381 18% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0392042965183 0.15604864568 25% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00506078318558 0.0819641961636 6% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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