The government and individuals are spending too much money on national celebrations like new year or festivals. Do you agree or disagree?
Celebrations are inevitable in each community, although, usage of huge money for such party or entertainment is escalating recently. However, in this essay i strongly disagree to this statement because, government has many things to do for the society rather than one or two days celebrations like poverty, education, and maintenance of road and transportation and so on.
Firstly, officials must engage the people to aware about nation and national celebrations with minimal expense. Introduce everyone about the importance and path way of primal journey of the country and old generation leaders through cultural programs and arts. Get ride of spending extra expenditure like fireworks, and firecracker instead of use light candles to flourish the value of communal activities. For instance, encourage students to arrange program on national day irrespective of celebrities or entrepreneur which lead to the enhancement of knowledge regarding the day and the greatness in compared with a long speech.
Secondly, Government should spend money for either literacy or unemployment and take less concentration towards to big celebrations. In addition, every family and individual would share their festivals with orphans or slum areas developmental programs. Eventually, people might get mental satisfaction and kindness to the society not like one day big party and enjoyment with expensive foods and drinks. For example, parents and legislation on to such big festive s controls would entitle to society and ancestors difficulties for the freedom reports, Mr. Abdul Kalam on media.
To conclude, enjoyment and parties are essential, nevertheless wastage of too much money over to day full entertainment would lead to detrimental effect on society. Since, spends money for goodness may last for ever.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59489051095 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10378018485 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653284671533 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.085029468 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.75 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.91666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200507387571 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659161240895 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412721082201 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115292890299 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272789358805 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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