Salary increases and promotions to new positions are not the only ways to reward employees for good work. What other rewards for good work can be effective in encouraging further good work? Use specific examples to support your response.
Rewards to employees is best way to motivate and encourage them. Reward system has power to get best from employees. In recent, there are many rewards systems are already implemented.companies gives reward to employes like, increase salary, promotion to new positions, and give awards and accolades.Some compney also gives incentives which halpful to family of employes like, health insurance, children education schoolarships, offers on purhasing household items, etc.
Now, increasing salary and promotions to new positions are not only ways to reward employes.Compney should give awards and accolade to employes as they giving his/her best afford to do best work.Also, some company should weekly give praise to worker and give best award according to that.Like, when i was working in kataria automobile , there was award sysetem is implemented in which there are awards like, best mechanic of the week, best sals person of the week, best manager of the month, etc.So, this type of award encourage employes to do more and good work.Many companies praise their workers in fornt of all, and gives his/her exemple of good work, so they encourage to do more good work and also other people do good work to be an exemple for others.These type of motivations are play vital role for good work of employes.
Today, many large industries give incentives that are directly related to their family.For exemple, they gives health insurance, children education scholarship, discount of purchase of food , cloth, etc. Even some companies give well furnished house with car and servants to their best employes.As, in my family my brother working in adani company as managing director and by his good work company gives good accomadation and food facility. also, they cover his health insurance. so compnay should gives this type of incentives to thier best employes.This will eventullay lead to companies progress as all empolyes gives their best affords.
To sum up, giving high salary and promotion is not only ways to give reward to their emploies.There is many other incentives and rewards are available which also increases thier work output and motivate them to do their best work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, well, even so, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1832.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 349.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24928366762 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85659671708 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498567335244 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 572.4 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.1344086022 189% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 229.982661719 48.9658058833 470% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 203.555555556 100.406767564 203% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 38.7777777778 20.6045352989 188% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.5376344086 433% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281085970242 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115369051611 0.076458572812 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103399118334 0.0737576698707 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194016590936 0.150856017488 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0855187574316 0.0645574589148 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.7 11.7677419355 193% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.91 58.1214874552 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 10.1575268817 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.0537634409 171% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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