The last 100 years have seen huge technological advancements in every field of research. What, in your opinion, is one of the most important technological achievements in the last 100 years?
These days, there is an ongoing debate between people about the most important technological achievement in the last 100 years. While some progressively adore that Computer is most important invention, other undoubtedly despise it. This essay will prudently persuade about inventions in last century and will conclude that computer is most important in all of them.
We have seen a huge technological advancement in last century in field of research. All of these inventions are for betterment of human. But when we have to chose most important from them, no doubt computer is far ahead in this selection. There are a lot of reasons behind this. The top most is that computer is being used these days in all other fields of research starting from medicine toward space. For example, as per my own experience when I was a university student, I performed an academic research. The results of this research revealed that medical research is increased more than 100 times after computer is involved in this field. So we can say that computer use is good in research field.
On the other hand, computer is also enabling students to enahnce their study. Because of internet and electronic books students have vast range of study material with easy access. Information technology has revolutionaized the way of communication. As per research conducted by a prestigious university, becuase of computer usage learning ability of students become double. So in education field computer usgae is positive.
After analyzing above advantages of computer in different fields, one can say that computer is most valuable invention. So in my opinion, computer is the most important technological achievement in the last century.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 486, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'academic research'.
Suggestion: academic research
...I was a university student, I performed an academic research. The results of this research revealed ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, for example, no doubt, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 276.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21014492754 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93418315581 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557971014493 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.8624418308 50.4703680194 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.8888888889 104.977214359 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 20.9669160288 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.25397266985 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 6.9802955665 186% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286818824389 0.242375264174 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0978304868472 0.0925447433944 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115635183829 0.071462118173 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178869386912 0.151781067708 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661239655173 0.0609392437508 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 53.1260098522 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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