It is the case that in the presence of children’s long duration spent indoors, as a result, it hinders them in limited experience to be equipped, which is regarded as a drawback to the majority of children in due course. In the essay, I will describe how the lack of exposing in the world is affected to them.
Having stayed long indoors can have a detrimental impact on children in learning workplace in reality society. Most often, children do not acquire knowhow in the processing in workplace with limited communication with people. As they are grown up, the way on how they get use to work might be hindered. Since they are not equipped with adequate potentials, they will work with lack of experience gained, thus they will be regarded as incapable and not productive to survive in nature.
Another negative effect on children is that they might find hard to communicate with others. The reason is that they may fear their words will be twisted and used against them. As they were isolated from society from a long while, they learn nothing about interpersonal relationships, how one another get along and so on. They are used to communicate with their friends in the internet social chat groups online, which is lack of face-to-face conversations. They fail to look into the true character of others. When they are asked to speak, no matter what they say, they will be feared in looking into others’ eyes and they feared on what should not be said might get others hurt. They would simply shut down and when working in society, they become isolated.
In summary, children getting in touch with the outside world, is something should not be neglected. Thus, the negative effects on them can be disastrous, in terms of their future work experience as well as social barrier.
- The bar graph shows the global sales in billions of dollars of different types of digital games between 2000 and 2006 44
- The charts below show information about consumer decisions regarding mobile phone purchases in two different countries. 61
- The charts below show information about consumer decisions regarding mobile phone purchases in two different countries. 61
- As the world becomes technologically advanced, computer are replacing more and more job. Describe some job positions that may be lost because of computers and discuss at least one problem that may result. 56
- Children today are too dependent on computersand electronic entertainment. It would be better toencourage them to spend more time outsideplaying sports and games. Do you agree ordisagree with this statement? Give your opinion. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 273, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...y are grown up, the way on how they get use to work might be hindered. Since they a...
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Line 5, column 332, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to communicating'.
Suggestion: used to communicating
...e another get along and so on. They are used to communicate with their friends in the internet soci...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, may, so, thus, well, while, in summary, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8474025974 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67074022472 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525974025974 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0849075511 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5333333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237619395197 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908975970006 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471268036727 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158398140037 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547361948488 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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