Modern era experiences an escalate competitive nature in all sectors. In this context,it is a matter of debate that every individuals have to compete in their life or not. I strongly believe that nowadays all human beings facing different types of competition in their life.
Nowadays all sectors demand highly intelligent people and they search for the best. In order to meet this qualification every one have to upgrade their skills. When they upgraded themselves get a good position in the society. Thus, this tight competition raises in all person's life.
Modern generation is fast thinkers and first they consider their own needs and facilities. For a bright future they are willing to take any adventure in life. Their for, all person's suffering competition in their life.
To conclude, modern situations and attitudes make the human life competitive. This change may increase in upcoming days also.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e nature in all sectors. In this context,it is a matter of debate that every indivi...
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...nt types of competition in their life. Nowadays all sectors demand highly intel...
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Line 2, column 170, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...every one have to upgrade their skills. When they upgraded themselves get a good pos...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...s, this tight competition raises in all persons life. Modern generation is fast t...
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...ompetition raises in all persons life. Modern generation is fast thinkers and f...
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...suffering competition in their life. To conclude, modern situations and attit...
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...is change may increase in upcoming days also.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 771.0 1615.20841683 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 146.0 315.596192385 46% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28082191781 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47606760199 4.20363070211 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73486726696 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 176.041082164 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643835616438 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 506.74238477 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 16.5636398979 49.4020404114 34% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.25 106.682146367 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.1666666667 20.7667163134 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.5 7.06120827912 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156738387227 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631341018335 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538094445144 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981016226611 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0163275036277 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.46 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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