problems and can’t stay the whole course.
Write a letter to the course director. In your letter,
explain your interest in the course
describe your problems
find out if a refund is possible
Dear Sir,
I am writing to you to show my eagerness to join the tennis course with your institution during this holidays. I am really fond of sports activities such as football, cricket, badminton and more but the one with which I am more fascinated is tennis. Furthermore, I would like to delve into the details with this outdoor game course to explore my expertise and capabilities for the same.
However, last week of course and my first week of orientation programme for my next semester will clash if I will enroll for this course during this summer holidays. It would affect my studies as I will not able to attend the orientation classes on those initial days of college and even I may miss the final tournaments for tennis due to this phenomenon. Thus, I have to take correct decision in advance.
At last but not least, I cannot sacrifice my education just to live my passion. Therefore, I would like to request you to refund the money for those days if its probable to you for last week of tennis course as I would not be able to appear for that week. I hope you can understand my perspective as well.
Waiting for your favorable response,
Thanks and Regards
Joe
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...nis course with your institution during this holidays. I am really fond of sports ac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, really, therefore, thus, well, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62735849057 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5889437884 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561320754717 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.2955266401 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 4.34317383033 212% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.070777452267 0.216113520407 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0340376844453 0.0766984524023 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394954498522 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0661871685115 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476088360493 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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