It is a growing trend in most developed countries to encourage teenagers especially students to pursue part-time jobs along with their education. In my opinion, advantages of having a part-time job outweighs its disadvantages in the sense that capital earned by a student through a part-time job can be ploughed back into supporting his/her education. This essay delves into both the positive and negative outcomes of having a temporary part-time job at an early age.
Many people have an impression that committing to a temporary job while studying affects a student life adversely. For instance, a student or a teenager might dedicate a large proportion of his/her time doing a part-time job. Consequently, he/she will be having less time to focus on his/her education which might defeat the primary purpose of pursuing a part-time job. Furthermore, according to a radical study in countries of North America, approximately 30% of teenagers leave their education midway and transform their temporary job into a permanent one.
Albeit there may be repercussions, part-time job serve as a boon for majority of teenager population who supports their education through these part-time jobs. These jobs also assist teenagers to mitigate financial pressure on themselves and their families. Having a part-time job also render teenagers socially active and imbibes a sense of responsibility in them. Moreover, majority of students end up being successful professionals after completely their education due to the skills they learn while doing their respective part-time jobs.
To conclude, advantages of having a part-time job eclipse the disadvantages of not having one. However, it is also imperative for universities to conduct a counselling for students in order to guide them about time management and therefore, curb the negative impacts of teenager's involvement in part-time jobs.
- Popular events like the football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. 22
- Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree 73
- Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organized group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own.Discuss both these views and give your 56
- Popular events like the football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. 56
- Some people think that money can buy all the happiness in life. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and include relevant examples to support your answer. 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50171821306 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0987723612 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549828178694 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0567644562 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.153846154 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30329429756 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138724196245 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478123464088 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214035035943 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380957967044 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.