Today, the majority of children are raised by their grandparents due to the fact that their parents are busy working. To what extent do you think it affects the whole family?
After several decades of feminism, the women’s rights are gradually equal to men’s rights. This causes to the increase of career-oriental lifestyle of women instead of staying at home as a traditional housewife in the past. Therefore, children have to live with grandparents as fathers and mothers have no time to look after them. Personally, this is not a positive phenomenon. In this essay, information and evidence are given to clarify my point of views.
Firstly, it is clear that grandparents are trustworthy caretakers for their grandchildren. However, spending maximum time with grandparents may heavily affect to the relationship between children and their parents. Apparently, children have a tendency to close with people who foster them. Due to the fact that lacking of sharing time together with fathers and mothers, children might find it difficult to develop the bond of love with parents. For example, it is commonly observed that children in Vietnam are mostly raised by grandparents. Fathers and mothers can only spend a little time with their children after a long exhausted working day. As a result, children often just listen to grandparents as parents are not closely involved with their upbringing.
Secondly, it is generally seen that grandparents are over indulge the kids leading to possibility of spoiling children eventually when grandparents tend to satisfy all the requests of children. This reaction teaches the kids that they can have everything they want. Obviously, this is unrealistic expectation not from their family but also from other people that they can meet outside. Moreover, old people deserve to live peacefully and enjoy the life without worrying about children. Grandparent spent most of youth and effort to bring their own children up, it is injustice for them to find out relaxing time are replaced by childcare again. The stress occurs while fostering a baby might cause the dissension between the members of family. For example, disagreements with parents on things like discipline, screen time or food etc for kids may lead to the tension atmosphere and have a negative effect on children.
To conclude, all parents are responsible for raising up their children as their roles are important and irreplaceable. Grandparents may play the support role to bring up children if they are willing and have enough condition.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2009.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31481481481 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92892509682 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550264550265 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3994805635 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6666666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52380952381 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228991006089 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716278799115 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663751396773 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147433560334 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766178402007 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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