Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic? What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
During recent years, people have become more adventurous in their choice of holiday destination and are more willing to travel to unusual places like the Antarctic or the Sahara desert. Although visiting these places seem to be an exciting experience, there are several dangers threatening the visitors’ lives.
Perhaps the most impressive advantage of offbeat traveling is that it improves travelers’ confidence in their capabilities. The great sense of satisfaction together with the excitement that one would feel by successfully accomplishing a difficult journey, is a great asset which cannot be achieved by visiting common places. Furthermore, since few people are able to commute to such places, nature is almost untouched and of breathtaking beauty. Therefore, travelers not only would be amazed by the unprecedented scenery of unconventional places but also they have the opportunity to explore rare species of flora and fauna which could be found there.
Difficult places should be visited with caution, however, as the adventure might be accompanied by some dangerous situations. There is a wide range of poisonous animals including scorpions and snakes, for example, in the Sahara desert, which can cause serious harm to the tourists’ health. In addition to wild animals, extreme weather condition seems to be another challenging situation which tourists would have to deal with. The weather in the Antarctic, for instance, is highly variable and changes dramatically in a short period of time, which means that hot sunshine can change to a dangerous snowstorm from one moment to another.
To conclude, the excursion of difficult places is considered to be highly risky, yet some people tend to undertake difficulties in order to experience something valuable which cannot be found easily elsewhere.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-09-12 | Divyashetti | 56 | view |
| 2018-08-05 | parsaeian | 84 | view |
- In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this? 84
- You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work.Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter,• describe the si 73
- Some people say that the current obsession with technology and the internet means that we are creating a generation of people that have poor social skills. Do you agree with this statement? 89
- People produce more garbage than in the past Explain how it is affecting us and the measures that could be taken to address the situation 86
- Some people think that children should learn to compete in the world but others think the children should be taught to cooperate so as to become more useful to society Discuss both views and give your own opinion 75
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 532, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ble and changes dramatically in a short period of time, which means that hot sunshine can chan...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5409252669 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06177660961 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633451957295 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.8654510429 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.545454545 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5454545455 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216006133813 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757203465575 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542219023848 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127167485329 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679941064926 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.