You have recently changed your job and started working for a new company.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter:
Explain why you changed your previous job
Describe your new job
Tell him/her your other news.
Dear Sandra,
I'm writing this letter to tell you some news which has happened in my life.
First of all, remember that time you helped me to upgrade my resume? Well, I sent it to a company in downtown applying for a position. Last Monday, they informed me that I got the job. You know that I wasn't being well-paid and it was hard for me to pay all my bills.
My activities in the new job didn't change at all, and I get home one hour earlier. Besides, not only my workmates are friendly and funny, but also is my boss.
Finally, I need to tell you more some news. My sister is pregnant! My mom is so excited about her first grandchild. Actually, all the members of my family are anxious about the birth.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best wishes,
Márcia.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sandra, Im writing this letter to tell you some ne...
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... me that I got the job. You know that I wasnt being well-paid and it was hard for me ...
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... bills. My activities in the new job didnt change at all, and I get home one hour ...
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Suggestion: I'm
... family are anxious about the birth. Im looking forward to hearing from you soo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, finally, first, if, look, so, well, you know, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 647.0 937.175257732 69% => OK
No of words: 147.0 206.0 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40136054422 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48200454523 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25343665741 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.687074829932 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 189.0 290.88556701 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.7053171288 44.8134815571 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 53.9166666667 76.5299724578 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.25 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 4.34317383033 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114715785882 0.216113520407 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424873061259 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325934555585 0.0603063233224 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0689318661072 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0204485308599 0.0580467560999 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.4 8.37731958763 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.35 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.7 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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