Many people believe that strict punishment should be given to traffic offences. To what extent do you agree?
A lot of people think that traffic offenders should be punished strictly for the road traffic offences. In my opinion, I agree that people with traffic violations should be punished to maintain law and order, and to reduce the risk of fatal accidents costing serious injuries and deaths of the innocent people.
Many people believe that traffic violators should be punished strictly and I agree. Absence of punishment leads to increase the chances of fatal accidents. These accidents result into serious injuries, and possible deaths of innocent lives. Relaxation in traffic punishment encourage risky drivers to drive dangerously without taking any consideration of the effects of their actions on other road users. Therefore, traffic offenders should be punished to set example for other irresponsible drivers.
Additionally, punishment for traffic violations is also important to maintain law and order in the traffic. A flexibility in traffic offence punishment would encourage the society as a whole to break traffic rules on a daily basis. As a result, traffic laws would be in place, but without regulations. Regulation in traffic laws can only be achieved through strict punishment that sets example for every body. Moreover, most of the road users fail to understand that established traffic laws are for their own safety. It is the strict punishment only, that acts as a deterrent to such people for traffic violations.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that traffic offenders should be given strict punishment on the spot to reduce the risk of life costing fatal accidents, and to maintain regulations for the enacted traffic laws.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 214, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...gulations for the enacted traffic laws.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36538461538 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82418496385 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496153846154 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0246336424 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6428571429 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390137065516 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16861391374 0.084324248473 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13093937371 0.0667982634062 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281828229307 0.151304729494 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490125140397 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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