Some people think that people should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
With the ever-increasing expectation on youngsters, parents are no longer satisfied with the education in schools and some educationists even claim that parents should take the initiatives in teaching their children at home.
It is understandable that parents may worry about their beloved children and try to provide the best for them in the hope of fostering their personal growth. Although the rationale behind is benevolent, is that the most effective and efficient means to teach their children during their formative years? The answer, sadly, is no. It is because students can benefit more a...
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