Your local council is considering closing a sport and leisure center that it runs, in order to save money
Write a letter to the local council, in your letter,
1- Give details of how you and your friends or family use the center.
2- Explain why the center is important for the local community.
3- Describe the possible effect on local people of the center closes.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in regard to the council decision of shutting down the sport`s center in the city due to saving the expenditure on it.
I have been informed with the council decision from a friend. When the news is confirmed from your local office about the closure, my friends, family and I were extremely disappointed. I personally was visiting the center regularly to practice some training activities. The center is also considered as our family hub to catch up and spend their spare time.
Not only my family and friends will be affected from the decision, but also the local community will suffer from it. The importance of the center comes from its healthy environment which is being provided for all kind of people. Families go to the center with their children to maintain their healthy bodies, and the center helped a lot in decreasing the obesity rate among the individuals.
I understand the council concern regarding the fund arrangement; however, the closure decision is not the right one. I would highlight that it will harm our community health rate, and that children won`t find a suitable place to practice their hobbies.
I look forward to reconsidering that decision from your end.
Yours faithfully,
Ayoub
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...table place to practice their hobbies. I look forward to reconsidering that deci...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, look, regarding, so, kind of, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1064.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06666666667 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73366515325 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609523809524 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2244254968 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6666666667 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 4.34317383033 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258527824737 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917295739148 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415399187577 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128855036568 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665342390093 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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