The Bar chart shows the top ten countries for production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
Summarise the information by select the main features, and make comparisons when relevant.
The amounts of electricity generated and used by the ten highest-producing countries in 2014 are plotted on the bar graph, ranked in order of production. The numbers are in units of billion kilowatt hours (bn kWh).
The countries produced more than the amount that they consumed, except for Germany. India and Canada had the largest surplus generation, producing about 24% more than they consumed. Germany, which ranked ninth on the list, consumed about 10% more than it produced.
Among the top five countries (China, US, Russia, Japan and India) China came in first with 5398 bn kWh produced, more than the combined amount of the next two countries on the list (the US and Russia), and more than seven times the median value (about 700). Second-ranking USA produced 4099, about four times as much as either third- or fourth- ranked Russia (1057) and Japan (936). These countries produced up to 10 percent more electricity than they consumed. Russia had the smallest excess, less than 1% (1057 versus 1038). India rounded up the top five, with 871 production and 700 consumption, respectively. Note India's large excess production of 171 bn kWh.
The remaining five countries (Canada, France, Brazil, Germany, and Republic of Korea) had electricity production ranging from 620 to 485 and a narrow range in their consumption values, ranging from about 500 to 450.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, third, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1132.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 224.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05357142857 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63899331456 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 106.607317073 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598214285714 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.4470598346 43.030603864 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.2 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 5.23603664747 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119583363957 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521400340475 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525431357672 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0820609828551 0.15604864568 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374658533441 0.0819641961636 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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