The given diagram provides information about the contribution of three sectors (namely, agriculture, manufacturing and business and financial service) to the Great Britain economy in the 20th century.
Overall, it can be clearly to seen, that manufacturing shows steady fall, while sector of business and financial increased gradually from 1900 to 2000. Agriculture demonstrates slight rise between 1900 and 1950, but then dropped dramatically.
In 1900 contribution of agriculture was more than manufacturing and considerably more than business and financial (about 50%, 45% and just under 5% respectively). However, in 1950 manufacturing was less than Agriculture and many more than business and financial (approximately 40%). In 1975, although manufacturing sector declined by 5%, it became the most spread contribution in the UK, while Manufacturing has fewer percentage than business and Financial. In the end of century positions of Agriculture and business and financial were replaced. The first sector became the the least development of economy, about 2%, the second sector became the most important with just over 30%.
- The chart below gives the information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- The table below shows the projected costing over the next five years in American dollars for three environmental projects for sustainable forestry The pie chart shows the expected expenditure breakdown allocation for the first year as the projects are set 84
- Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization.Why might this be the case?What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed? 73
- Some people believe they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state. What is the purpose of taxes? Why do some people refuse to pay taxes and explain the effects on society? 84
- The chart below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time in the year 1982 79
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 114, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ctors namely, agriculture, manufacturing and business and financial service to th...
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Line 3, column 567, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... were replaced. The first sector became the the least development of economy, about 2%,...
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Line 3, column 567, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... were replaced. The first sector became the the least development of economy, about 2%,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, second, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 959.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70833333333 4.92477711251 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21176598768 2.65546596893 121% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565476190476 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9315244744 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.875 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213013312329 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993412724778 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0887895253975 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174940186736 0.15604864568 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102241757971 0.0819641961636 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.2329268293 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 61.2550243902 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 11.4140731707 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.