Instead of trying to prevent climate change, people should find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree
Nowadays, climate change is a serious issue for existence of human beings. However, some people reckon that we should find out a way to live with this phenomenon instead of trying to prevent it. Personally, I absolutely disagree with the opinion.
To begin with, there are lot of reasons why we should stop climate change. The first one is that the phenomenon causes a plenty of negative impacts on agriculture on over the world due to flood, drought, storm and so on. Indeed, temperature changes unusually, drought and storms happen more frequently, which influence on crops as well as economies of most of countries around the world. Consequently, climate change threatens people’s lives significantly while people are not aware of this serious problem. Secondly, another reason making living with climate change be impossible is that it causes rising sea level because of melting ice. In addition, many regions of the world are lower sea level. This will lead to the fact that there are more and regions would be covered by sea water every single day and that would make a lot of people become homeless because there are not enough ground for everyone to live.
The other point needs to be concerned is that climate change can be prevented or reduced by a wide range of possible solutions. To be specific, governments can create laws stopping using fuels which causes carbon emission into the air and invest money in green energy sources such as wind power, solar power and hydro power. Therefore, I have a belief that if governments and citizens put their efforts on these solutions, people can tackle this trouble.
In conclusion, I completely disagree with the opinion that people can live with climate change without any necessary actions to deal with it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 353, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the countries') or simply say ''most countries''.
Suggestion: most of the countries; most countries
...luence on crops as well as economies of most of countries around the world. Consequently, climate...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01013513514 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56179783802 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618243243243 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7553882085 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.928571429 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1428571429 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276053605553 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0979812239631 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112041656249 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201366624164 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124586934393 0.056905535591 219% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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