True friendship is always a blessing. There is a popular epigram 'a friend in need is a friend indeed'. So, time factor does not count much to make a friend. Either your friend is old or new, the most important thing is the feeling you share with them. In the same way, having a old friend who understands you is a bliss. Therefore, I agree with the statement at some extent that it is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
First, one person who has been with you from your early days reminds you how you used to be and what your life struggles used to be like. That particular person has been with you in every thick and thin of your life. You share almost everything with that person. So, such a person has to be taken as precious part of your life. Here, you can understand the significance of old friendship. So, we have to learn to love and bask the bonding. Old is gold so are old friends, valuable as precious element.
Second, life is never a bed of roses. We have to choose friends wisely with whom we can share our lives with. To make a strong bond, we do not need to meet and talk everyday but whenever we talk, it is always the same. For instance, if you are in a dire situation where you are grappling against your bad health, one friend who wishes you good health, and the other who stays with you day and night to care, both are your friends. Here, we can not restrict a new friend to take care of you when we have no old friends left. We can not discriminate friendship.
Third, we can learn a lot from our friends and families. It is undeniable that how major part of our life revolve around them. Be it be school friends, college friends or workplace friends, everyone holds a special part in our lives. The duration of time does not matter a lot if we are able to have amiable relationship with people we meet. There are lots of songs, movies, series, stories etc. made for friends. Every person, irrespective of nationality and colour, have same affinity for friends. Every season of serial 'Friends' has been a worldwide hit, accepted by global population because it explains high and low, love and bonding, feud and reunion of the protagonists depicting friendship, this is a classic example of friendship.
Thus, in the ever changing life, we have to meet many new people. It is not a restriction to make new friends. We have to cherish our old friendship and learn to value it. Similarly, we can also make new friends with whom we feel bond with. Life is too short to regret and hate so, keep loving everyone and value every relationship.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 276, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...hare with them. In the same way, having a old friend who understands you is a bli...
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Line 1, column 309, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'be'
Suggestion: be
...having a old friend who understands you is a bliss. Therefore, I agree with the st...
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Line 5, column 166, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...g bond, we do not need to meet and talk everyday but whenever we talk, it is always the ...
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Line 5, column 470, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Here, we can not restrict a new friend to take care of you when we have no old ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, similarly, so, therefore, third, thus, as to, for instance, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 15.1003584229 192% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2125.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 481.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41787941788 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68313059816 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41092720056 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.467775467775 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 642.6 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.6003584229 155% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.3245914546 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.40625 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.03125 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28125 5.45110844103 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 24.0 11.8709677419 202% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28364249846 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813614297344 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0898731828788 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18724766403 0.150856017488 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100905736003 0.0645574589148 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 11.7677419355 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 58.1214874552 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.76 10.9000537634 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.58 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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