Prison is the best punishment for criminals. Discuss.
Sending criminals to jail is considered the best approach to deal with crime. However, several steps need to be taken in order to improve the effectiveness of prison. In my opinion, although imprisonment is prevalent, it cannot be seen as the best method.
Let's begin by looking at some disadvantages of prison. First of all, it could be remarkably costly to manage the prison. Governments have to invest a considerable amount of money and other resources to keep the prison running smoothly. Moreover, there might be cases of unexpected issues, such as escaping or disobedient criminals, which often require more attention from the authorities. Another drawback of prison is that after imprisonment, little people can start their life from scratch. Unfortunately, the society is often cruel to people who have made mistakes. For example, if somebody has criminal records in their CV, it would be difficult for them to receive any jobs from employers. As a consequence, they might commit a crime again because there are not any other choices.
Turning to the other side of the argument, compare with other kinds of punishment, imprisonment has some advantages. To begin with, jailing a person is a way to avoid the death penalty. Therefore, prison can be seen as a method to prove the morality and goodness of the punishment. Moreover, generally speaking, the prison is a suitable place for people to think about their misbehavior. For many, they have changed their viewpoints since they came out of prison.
In conclusion, currently, imprisonment is the most prevalent method to punish criminals. Nevertheless, there are still some emerging problems that need to be solved. From my point of view, the authorities and society should have looked at these issues more carefully to bring out the best solution for punishment.
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Suggestion: Let's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17508417508 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92506758225 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589225589226 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.9403748449 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.8947368421 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6315789474 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94736842105 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 17.0 3.9879759519 426% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252437905049 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066612075824 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486339846421 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14648811963 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0182432411309 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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