Prison is the best punishment for criminals. Discuss
Give reasons for your answer and include any revelant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Write at least 250 words
These days the question of whether criminals should or shouldn’t be kept in prison still remains controversial. Some people believe the best way to punish criminals is to keep them in prison. Personally, I am strongly convinced by the given idea.
In the first place, societies and communities will also become safer away from the dangers that threaten their lives . There are a large number of prisoners who are a danger to society and if criminals are made to meet their victims, they may think twice about committing commiting crime. For example, Criminals will not see what they did was wrong and they will feel angry at the victims for sending them to jail. They will seek to approach and retaliate against the victims if they do so that the victim's private life will be monitored and influenced.
Another reason for my belief is that prison is a particularly good way to rehabilitate prisoners to become better citizens before they are free. In prison, prisoners are trained and learn some life skills. For instance, They will learn vocational and other social skills and if they rehabilitate well, they will have the opportunity to be released. This will make their later life easier, help them have a stable job and gradually settle down, reintegrate into to the community.
In conclusion, it is believed that prison is an effective way to punish criminals. I firmly believe that those who have harmed other people should be in prison;, if they have taken a life, they should have their freedom taken away from them for life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
These days the question of whether criminals should or shouldn’t be kept i...
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Line 3, column 117, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...om the dangers that threaten their lives . There are a large number of prisoners w...
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Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...s that threaten their lives . There are a large number of prisoners who are a danger to society a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, so, still, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1284.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90076335878 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56126482258 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568702290076 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2798132861 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7692307692 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136488847839 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581111662447 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457303607664 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932739045656 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0107488841145 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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