Energy produced from 4 countries
The pie chart compares the production of electricity from different sources in 4 nations in two years 2003 and 2008.
It is clear that there are only figures for hydropower and fossil fuel in Morocco and Vietnam. Additionally, the electricity originated from fossil fuel was highest in India. Similarly, in Sweden hydropower made up the highest proportion.
As we can see that fossil fuel and hydropower are main sources of energy in Morocco and Vietnam. 95% of the electricity produced from water in Morocco compared to 44% in Vietnam. By contrast, the figure for fossil fuel in Vietnam was ten times higher compared to that in Morocco, 56% and 5% respectively.
Turning to the remaining, the percentage of energy originated from fossil fuel in India accounted for 82%, which was the most common electricity of four countries compared to only 4% in Sweden. At the same time, three times as much hydropower in Sweden was higher than that in India. Finally, the figure for nuclear electricity was the main energy source in Sweden, took up 44% while this proportion in India was only 4%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, similarly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96195652174 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73126350446 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505434782609 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6512271879 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173725973108 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729602347294 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766992953513 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0994226976006 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389011210197 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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