Dear Sir or Madam,
Hope you are doing good .I am writing this letter to you for expressing my appreciation for your decision to reward people who have contributed themselves to help others and brought positive amendments in the community.
I would like to recommend someone for the award who has contributed immensely for the ameliorate of our community.Mr kulwindersingh, a retired army officer, deserves for the award.He has been working for helping the poors more than 20 years and has provided a food and shelter to thousand people . His dedication is only to help the destitute people and he has been awarded many times from some reputed organizations as a good social worker.
According to my point of view ,I personally believe that you should have to consider him for the award for invigorating him in the more social collaborations and you should specially printed a trophy by his name to give him.
Thank you for your precious time.
Yours faithfully,
Arshdeep singh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: .
...Sir or Madam, Hope you are doing good .I am writing this letter to you for expr...
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Suggestion: I
...r or Madam, Hope you are doing good .I am writing this letter to you for expre...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...award who has contributed immensely for the ameliorate of our community.Mr kulwindersingh, a r...
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...ely for the ameliorate of our community.Mr kulwindersingh, a retired army officer,...
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Suggestion: He
...ed army officer, deserves for the award.He has been working for helping the poors ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oors more than 20 years and has provided a food and shelter to thousand people . ...
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Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...and has provided a food and shelter to thousand people . His dedication is only to help...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...d a food and shelter to thousand people . His dedication is only to help the dest...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...worker. According to my point of view ,I personally believe that you should hav...
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Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'print'
Suggestion: print
...collaborations and you should specially printed a trophy by his name to give him. T...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08536585366 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91625380785 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670731707317 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.416084633 44.8134815571 226% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 139.0 76.5299724578 182% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 16.8248392259 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.16666666667 4.34317383033 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185868100313 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930766591302 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767912104297 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113946187083 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0930163826365 0.0580467560999 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 8.37731958763 193% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 70.7449484536 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 7.45979381443 185% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 8.62886597938 232% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.