people using text-messages while driving should be penalized. Discuss?
These days with advanced communication technologies people are using different types of communicating applications for communicating their loved once. Some people believe that text messages should be penalized when driving a car while others oppose this statement. I believe that penalizing the text messages in driving is very necessary in this era. the reasons are accidents will reduced.
Firstly, many people uses the phone when they are driving which is very dangerous. Especially, young stars uses text messages typing when driving vehicles which leads to accidents and very risky which sometimes leads to death. By texting the message in phone people cannot concentrate on the other vehicles and it may lead to serious complications. According to the survey, more than 10,000 people are dying by accidents by not concentrating on other vehicles beside them.
Secondly, there are ample of reasons to the people who are using mobile phone while driving, if it needed compulsory people should stop driving and talk in emergency cases. Government should provide awareness on this and should maintain strict rules and regulations to control this act. For example controlling cameras should introduce on roads to capture the picture of people driving the vehicles while driving. By this people can be penalized.
In the conclusion, there are many advantages by penalizing on driving the car and chatting in mobile. People will change if the awareness campaigns are provided in public places
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... accidents by not concentrating on other vehicles beside them. Secondly, there...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1269.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 234.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42307692308 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75504504719 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 139.433497537 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547008547009 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 397.8 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4610192273 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6428571429 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7142857143 20.9669160288 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 7.25397266985 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.453735241121 0.242375264174 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15275876926 0.0925447433944 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104749520023 0.071462118173 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248513764173 0.151781067708 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107509060751 0.0609392437508 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.1260098522 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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